缩写改写材料
缩写改写材料1. He was driving home one cold evening on a country road when he saw an old lady, stranded on the side of the road．He stopped to give her a hand．"Why don't you wait in the car where it is warm, Madam? It won’t take me long．” He said, By the way，my name is Joe．”
She had a flat tire．Joe crawled under the car and changed the tire. But he got dirty and his hands hurt. She couldn’t thank him enough and asked him how much she owed him. He told her that if she really wanted to pay him back, the next time she saw someone in need of help, she could give that person the assistance they needed, and Joe added, “And think of me”.
She drove off with gratefulness. A few miles down the road the lady saw a small restaurant．She went in．The waitress who was nearly eight months pregnant, greeted her with a sweet smile. The old lady wondered how someone like her who seemed so poor could be so genuinely happy and how she could maintain her enthusiasm in her work in such inconvenient conditions. Then Joe’s words struck her. After the lady finished her meal, the waitress went to get her change from a hundred-dollar bill. However, the lady stopped right out the door.
When the waitress came back, she-noticed a note on the table, saying “I’m helping you because someone once helped me. If you really want to pay me back, here is what you can do--Do not let the chain of love end with you．”
The waitress went home that night with the generous tip and what the lady had written. With the baby due next month, she and her husband needed money. She knew how worried her husband was and as he lay sleeping next to her, she whispered, “Everything’s going to be all right. I love you, Joe.”
缩写改写材料2. When passing through an airport one morning, I caught one of those trains that take travelers from the main terminal(终点站) to their boarding gates. Free and clean, the trains run back and forth all day long. Not many people consider them fun , but this Saturday I heard laughter.
At the front of the first car, a man and his son were looking out of the window at the track . The train had just stopped and the passengers went off . As the doors closed again, the father said excitedly, “Here we go! Hold on to me tight ! Look!” the father said to his son. “See that pilot? I bet he’s walking to his plane.” The son craned his neck to look.
As I got off, I saw that man and his son were back at the platform, too.
“Do you want to go home now?” the father asked.
“I want to ride some more!”
“More?” the father said. “You’re not tried?”“This is fun!” his son said.
“All right,” the father replied, and when a door opened, we all got on.
I then realized that they had not been heading for a flight at all, but had just been riding the shuttle for fun.
“Where are all these people going, Daddy?” the son asked.
“All over the world,” the father replied. The other people in the airport were leaving for places or arriving at the ends of their journeys. The father and the son, though , were just riding this shuttle together, making it exciting. The father and his son shared each other’s company.
There are parents who can afford to send their children to Europe or Disneyland, yet many of those children turn out rotten and cause social problems. There are parents who live in poverty and cannot give their children cars or swimming pools , but their kids grow up to be happy and successful. There are a number of debates over possible solutions. Yet, the key to these problems is simple: if parents care enough to spend time with and pay attention to their kids, these problems will not happen. Here was a father who just cared about spending the day with his son and came up with this plan for a Saturday morning. It costs nothing, yet it is the most priceless thing in the world.
3. 润色修改材料 (先改错---修改稿1---修改稿2---修改稿3)
润色修改例1 (先改错---修改稿1---修改稿2---修改稿3)
1．Everyone need help. Without help, a man want to succeed will be very hard.
Take myself for example, I received help from a stranger. One day, I took bus to go to school. When I went in the bus, I found I forgot my wallet at home. I was no a penny. How ashamed I was! When I didn’t have any ideas, a man paid for the cost for me. I was so grateful for his help. From then, when I saw someone need help, I often offer them help.
to sum up, when someone are in trouble, we should give them a hand. If that, when are in trouble, others will help us too. I firmly believe that if everyone help each other, the world will be more harmonious
润色修改例2 (先改错---修改稿1---修改稿2---修改稿3)
2. No one can succeed without others’ help. It is helping each other that makes the world more beautiful.
I can never forget the help from my math teacher. After becoming a serious high school student, I found math a biggest problem, for I couldn’t understand the concept and couldn’t finish the homework easily as well. I was about to lose heart in math when my math teacher came to help me. She talked a deep talk to me, figuring out my weakness in math, then she lent me a book called “the beauty of math”. With all her help, I came to develop interest in math and do a good job now.
I succeed in math with the help of my math teacher. I couldn’t thank her more. And I will try my best to help others.
润色修改例3 (先改错---修改稿1---修改稿2---修改稿3)
3. “We are the world, we are the children.” the song is very beautiful. We all need others’ help, and had acquired others’ help.
In my life time, I had a valuable experience, I got up late when the alarm clock still opened. I was not eat breakfast rushed into door to caught for the bus. But when I arrived at the bus station, the bus which was went to school had left. I should walk to school. I thought that I would be late last time and my teacher’s serious face.
When a car stopped and asked me what happed, I told my story with him. He is kindness, he asked me to go on. He said that he would took me.
Fortunately, I was not late. Thanks for his kindness. up till now, when I remember this thing, my heart is warm. In out life time, everyone can meet difficulties, when we meet difficulty, we always desires to acquire help. So we should help others when they are in trouble. Only in this way, the world can be friendly.
